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OdarkaPenpusher
Posted: September 7, 20202020-09-07T22:54:26+10:00 2020-09-07T22:54:26+10:00In: Comedy

When a film crew is ungrateful on set, a fed up crafty serves up the ultimate revenge.

When a film crew is ungrateful on set, a fed up crafty serves up the ultimate revenge.
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    1. NeedyGoldfish Penpusher
      2020-09-07T23:22:28+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 11:22 pm

      This logline would benefit from a clearer major event, specifying what the film crew member does to show their ungratefulness. Same goes for the action – what does the crafty need to accomplish in order to serve up this revenge? Also, I don’t know what a crafty is, and I suspect most people that aren’t in the movie industry don’t either, so maybe replace that with a more descriptive term of the job.

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    2. oscuro escriba Penpusher
      2020-09-25T10:16:02+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2020 at 10:16 am

      Coincido con la revisión anterior. Qué es un “astuto ” en la industria del cine?

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