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Posted: 2021-09-07T00:12:15+10:00 In:

When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape

When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape
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    1. Penpusher

      In space no one can hear you in space.

      Jokes aside, nice logline!
      I’m thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write “when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship” instead?
      Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?

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    2. Nice work, I need to rewatch this one. Maybe change out “the crew” to the main character?

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    3. Penpusher

      ALIEN$

      I agree with the previous penpusher. The beginning could also be something in the lines of “When accidentally bringing a lethal alien onboard the spaceship…”

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    4. Penpusher

      maybe

      When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship, the small crew must to fight to the last man to avoid taking the monster back to earth.

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