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moviefreak81Samurai
Posted: April 8, 20182018-04-08T08:24:31+10:00 2018-04-08T08:24:31+10:00In: Examples

When a prostitute of a wild west town is cut up, her friends hire an old formely retired gunslinger for vengance. – Unforgiven

When a prostitute of a wild west town is cut up, her friends hire an old formely retired gunslinger for vengance. – Unforgiven
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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2019-08-07T21:34:39+10:00Added an answer on August 7, 2019 at 9:34 pm

      Who is the protagonist in this story? The prostitute? One of her friends? Or the gunslinger? Whichever it is, write the logline from their perspective.

      >>>>> Formerly retired
      “Formerly” is unnecessary here. If he’s retired and takes the job it is then a given that he is formerly retired.

      I want to know who cut her up too. Who is the antagonist? An outlaw? Or the sheriff?

      I have seen the film so I’m reviewing this as if I haven’t.

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