Samurai
Posted: 2018-03-24T21:40:07+10:00 In:

When a pulp ficion novelis arrives at post war Vienna, he has to solve an intricate web of mystery to discover what really happened to an old friend.

When a pulp ficion novelis arrives at post war Vienna, he has to solve an intricate web of mystery to discover what really happened to an old friend.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      I’d say you’re missing the real inciting incident and stakes at hand.

      My try:
      After his friend is killed in post-war Viena, a disenchanted novelist must uncover a crime syndicate spreading diluted penicillin to discover the truth about his friend.

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    2. Samurai

      Thanks Nir.. I was in doubt how much to put in from the plot. Obviously the inciting incident would be the killing of his friend, but then, should we give in the dilluted penicillin in the log line? I mean, to some point in the movie we are still in doubt (and want to believe) Lime is/was a good man…

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    3. Penpusher

      I feel like the penicillin detail is unnecessary – how about: “After his friend is killed in post-war Vienna, a disenchanted novelist finds himself navigating a web of shady characters to discover the truth about the man’s life – and death.”

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