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TessWhite
Posted: March 22, 20132013-03-22T14:53:59+10:00 2013-03-22T14:53:59+10:00In: Student Loglines

When a sailor's young son is taken out to sea by ghosts on his father's boat, the father struggles to get his son back after the superstitious townspeople refuse to be involved with a "haunted" boat.

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    1. Lily Arenstein
      2013-03-22T15:07:25+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 3:07 pm

      I like it!

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    2. Daniel Helis
      2013-03-22T21:30:29+10:00Added an answer on March 22, 2013 at 9:30 pm

      given the original draft i saw i have to say that this is a vast improvement. i kinda hope you make this a film

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    3. SydneyPaul
      2013-03-23T20:30:07+10:00Added an answer on March 23, 2013 at 8:30 pm

      Looks interesting – here is the same idea tweaked a little, in case it helps:

      “When ghosts commandeer his boat and take his young son, a sailor has until dawn to overcome superstitious townspeople and assemble a rescue team to save his boy from purgatory.”

      Good luck!

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