Logliner
Posted: 2016-03-01T13:15:50+10:00 In:

When a vintage cowboy doll’s status as favourite toy is threatened by the arrival of a brand new space ranger action figure, the cowboy tries to assert his dominance but his jealous antics get them both lost while moving day looms closer and closer.

Toy Story

Share

    Post a review

    You must login to add an answer.

    To see everything,

    2 Reviews

    1. Logliner

      Toy Story – well I’m not the expert, but the logline has got 2 key points in it. Character and inciting incident. I guess you might want to work on the “action” bit which the character must do to resolve the situation. Hope that helps.

      • 0
    2. Singularity

      Two toys fight for the affection of their 6-year old owner.? But when they fall into the clutches of the cruel boy next door, they must join forces to survive and get back to their owner before the family moves.
      (40 words)

      • 0