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grbrinkleyPenpusher
Posted: August 16, 20222022-08-16T01:13:26+10:00 2022-08-16T01:13:26+10:00In: Horror

When a Wiccan radio host chooses to cast a spell to assist a desperate listener, things go horrifyingly wrong, as she unleashes something far more sinister and thus loses the listener in the process. Then she must find a way to get the listener back, the only way being an action that would put her own life in danger.

When a Wiccan radio host chooses to cast a spell to assist a desperate listener, things go horrifyingly wrong, as she unleashes something far more sinister and thus loses the listener in the process. Then she must find a way to get the listener back, the only way being an action that would put her own life in danger.
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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-08-16T16:12:39+10:00Added an answer on August 16, 2022 at 4:12 pm

      Hi grbrinkley,
      This is how I personally see the story:

      A Wiccan radio host who unleashes something sinister and loses one of her audience when she casts a spell to assist her must now get her back by putting her own life in danger.

      I hope this helps.

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2022-08-24T05:54:59+10:00Added an answer on August 24, 2022 at 5:54 am

      Another angle:
      “A late-night Wiccan radio host sets out to rescue [a recently dumped] listener when her [retribution] spell unleashes something much more sinister.”

      As a reader, the phrase “something far/much more sinister” is considered a teaser. Loglines are supposed to tell. Thus, I would rewrite to inject the sinister stakes to help the premise.

      Make this yours, take care.

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