Logliner
Posted: 2015-11-09T05:13:02+10:00 In:

When a young girl wakes up in the forest, struggling to remember what brought her there and made her pass out, a friend appears to help her get back home.

When a young girl wakes up in the forest, struggling to remember what brought her there and made her pass out, a friend appears to help her get back home.
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    1. Singularity

      The genre is horror.? What’s so horrible about a friend appearing to help her get back home?? I’m guessing that the ‘friend’ turns out to be her worst nightmare incarnate.? But I shouldn’t have to guess that. The logline should tell me.? What is the nature of the threat this ‘friend’ poses.? What must she do about it?

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    2. Logliner

      When I read the logline I immediately figured out that her friend was behind of what happened to her. dpg guessed it to. So if that’s your twist then it’s not a very good one.

      I also don’t think the drug will be a big surprise either.

      That said I think you should go with the second logline that you posted. But I would explain better what the friend does to the young woman. It’s a horror movie so does he torture her? What horrible things does he do to her?

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