Title: puncture punch
variableUberwriter
When amateur thieves break into his retirement home it’s upto an aging war veteran to kick their a**, risking his slip disk
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This is probably not very helpful, but this logline makes me chuckle. Sounds like something I?d enjoy watching.
This reads very well as a premise for a comedy.
I would make the stakes higher, money is less relevant for these people than their memories.
I would also expand the story to include more of the MC’s retirement home commrads:
After thieves break into their retirement village, a war veteran must lead a group of seniors, walking aids and all, to save their most cherished possessions.