A tweaked version of a logline
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When an assassin whose mind is reformatted after every 72 hours falls for his latest target he will use his skills to take down those targeting her before his mind resets again.
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(it’s a promising plot..for obvious reasons)
but you are headed towards a tragedy..
now that there are multiple hunters for a single target, means it matters-personally-to the organisation hiring them, that she is dealt with..
when the MC becomes aware of their personal grudge (after every bounty hunter is taken care of) he decides to burn it to the ground…even if it means his own end
except when all this is over, she returns to him (having forgotten her and they fall in love again)
(pretty clich?d so..)
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When an assassin whose mind is reformatted after every job falls in love with his latest target, he has 72 hours to save her life and his memories of her.
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If this encapsulates your concept, then it is a movie I would definitely like to see.
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>>>?but it may turn out he has been programmed to love her…
Or so he thinks.? Or so he fears, that his attraction to her is love only a simulcarum.? He’s not sure his feelings for her are real and therefore neither is the audience. A good thematic twist to keep the audience guessing to the very last scene.
>>get the order cancelled, so his firm won?t hunt her, which will trigger a reboot
A necessary step to achieving the objective goal, but not THE objective goal, so it need not to be part of the logline.? All we need to know is he’s programmed to kill her — but he wants to save her life.? Details to follow in the script.
Again, this is a movie I would want to see. I think you’ve got a very interesting premise.? Best wishes