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Posted: 2017-08-31T12:10:08+10:00 In:

When an FBI agent is called to investigate the murder of a teenage girl, he is thrust into the underworld of a small wooded town in the Pacific Northwest. A surreal and introspective look into the corruption of the American Dream.

When an FBI agent is called to investigate the murder of a teenage girl, he is thrust into the underworld of a small wooded town in the Pacific Northwest. A surreal and introspective look into the corruption of the American Dream.
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    3 Reviews

    1. Uberwriter

      Shyla,

      I like the first part of this, although it lacks an urgency or specific stake other than solving a murder. What else can you add about the 2nd and 3rd acts?

      I’m not too sure about what you mean with the the second line, how it fits into your story, or why you even need to use it at all.

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    2. Singularity

      Kind of Twin Peaks, wouldn’t you say?

      Also, if the FBI guy is investigating a murder he’s pretty much doing his job. Anything else you could add to make it unusual or personal and not just a nother day on the job?

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    3. Uberwriter

      Aren’t they remaking it, or has that been a bust?

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