Mentor
Posted: 2016-10-25T15:11:17+10:00 In:

Discovering his memories have been manipulated, a security analyst must use clues hidden by himself to retrieve his real memories and expose his employer’s secret control over society.

Discovering his memories have been manipulated, a security analyst must use clues hidden by himself to retrieve his real memories and expose his employer’s secret control over society.
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    1. Singularity

      Why must he know about a lost week in the past? ?What difference does will it make in his life in the future (aka: the stakes)?

      And what does an “experiences dealer” do?

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    2. Singularity

      For me the hook of the story is a protagonist who must use clues he squirreled away in order to recover the rest of his memories (similar to “Memento” only different). ?I find that interesting. ?So you’ve succeed in getting provisional attention.

      Now:

      What’s so special about the sinister secret that it must be exposed? There must be a 1,001+ plots about someone hiding a sinister secret. ?What’s so special about this one? ?What makes it?so sinister that he’s must not only expose it but stop the consequences and/or implications — NOW — or else?

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