When his childhood sweetheart turned actress goes through a high profile breakup, an overly responsible pastor heads to Hollywood to be her red carpet date, along the way encountering misfits who remind him what his real first love is.

As a Christian I like the idea of a believer being reminded of Who their real first love is. I also think that the two characters could clash – an actress and a pastor. And a pastor walking the red carpet seems very fish out of water in a way. There is also this promise of a journey which seems to be what the movie is mostly about. But I feel the main character is weakened by the logline. He is an overly responsible person who is going to help out this ex lover at the drop of a hat. So he is a really nice guy who is possibly very easily manipulated. Also you need some high stakes and a goal. I don’t see a big goal for the main character or what he will win if he meets the goal and the great things he will lose if he doesn’t meet it. Defintely some promising aspects to the ideas which more work could polish up.