Penpusher
Posted: 2016-06-16T23:28:16+10:00 In:

By the time humans defeated death, they reduced the population to billion and created the utopian civilization, Alonzo overtired from centennial life, accidentally discovers tiny, survived and hidden civilization of mortals.

By the time humans defeated death, they reduced the population to billion and created the utopian civilization, Alonzo overtired from centennial life, accidentally discovers tiny, survived and hidden civilization of mortals.
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    1. Singularity

      And then what? ?The logline establishes an interesting platform, a situation, from which to launch a plot. ?But it doesn’t launch a ?plot.

      What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal? ?(BTW: characters need not be named in the logline.) ?Who/what opposes him?

      And the “so what?” factor: ?what’s at stake? ?What does he stand to gain if he succeeds, lose if he fails?

      I suggest consulting the guidelines under “Training” at the top of the web page for tips on how to write a logline that launches a plot.

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