When one of gods angels falls down in an accident in a backyard, a atheist man must help her find her way up again through making and finding the key to heaven.
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When one of gods angels falls down in an accident in a backyard, a atheist man must help her find her way up again through making and finding the key to heaven.
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ANOTHER ‘fallen angels’ film?? Groan!!
More analytically:? What is the imperative for the atheist to help out the angel?? Can’t be romance because he’s going to lose her in the end (or will he?).
The way I see it, there are two ways to go to motivate the atheist:
For a more personal, character-driven, drama, he should be given a chance to either communicate with a dead loved one and/or to gain some life or relationship advantage from the angel when she ascends (perhaps to get a second chance with a girl who blew him off?)
For a more thriller-type drama, then some saving the world type?goal makes sense.
In either case, the logline should suggest the atheist’s push or pull in this.? If only to make the concept at least half-way interesting to read.
I completely get that there is comedic potential with this odd couple here, but the gags in this pairing are not going to sustain a feature length story (at least not?solely on that basis).??A further plot push is needed here, preferably something dramatic.? Even in the case of a serious comedy, the dramatic extra element is needed.? Remember that even the Ghostbusters were trying to save the world.
Steven.