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When passengers on a plane get murdered one by one, the crew must find the killer among them before there is only one left. [Title: Passengers, this isn’t your Captain speaking].
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Why is someone murdering people seemingly at random? There must be a reason for it. All the best guys ever written have a motive. Without it they’re just flat, lifeless, and unbelievable.
The idea of a murder mystery on a plane is interesting though.
I’d give us a single protagonist rather than just “the crew”. Who is “the detective” in this mystery?
Title wise… it’s a bit long. I’ve flown a lot and never heard the captain address the passengers as “passengers”. Usually, “ladies and gentlemen” or similar. Also, this title, to me, suggests something comedic. Is that the case? Murder on the Orient Express but on a plane? Murder at 36,000 feet? Maybe this is the maiden voyage of a new airliner? I’m just thinking out loud.
I think the premise is interesting. Just need to work on the execution.
I’m dubious about the title.? Ever since 911, airline cockpits have been locked down.
And I’m guessing it’s an international flight over, say, the Pacific.? So the airline can’t immediately touch down after the 1st murder– which would be the SOP. So I suggest the logline indicate that.
Given that there’s so little privacy on the plane, it’s a stretch to believe that one person after another can be killed– and there are no witnesses.? That the crew are too stupid to take elementary precautions to prevent it from happening again… and again.? But I assume you’ve got that all figured out, a credible modus operandi.
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