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NeedyGoldfishPenpusher
Posted: September 7, 20202020-09-07T22:52:43+10:00 2020-09-07T22:52:43+10:00In: Comedy

When Santa Claus goes rogue and begins kidnapping kids, a cynical 12-year-old must venture to the North Pole in order to save his abducted brother.

When Santa Claus goes rogue and begins kidnapping kids, a cynical 12-year-old must venture to the North Pole in order to save his abducted brother.
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    1. ermaa Penpusher
      2020-09-07T23:07:15+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 11:07 pm

      Nice one! Very on-point with the logline formula aswell!

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    2. Bo Teng Chea Penpusher
      2021-05-18T06:35:45+10:00Added an answer on May 18, 2021 at 6:35 am

      Hi NeedyGoldfish,

      Your idea is great but I feel like I needing to be more specific about why Santa Claus went rogue because it felt like a plot shortcut. (there is probaby is very good explanation)
      Would love to see this comedy on screen !

      Good luck on the writing

      BO

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