When the world?s deepest secrets start to become public knowledge, a disenfranchised former FBI profiler is thrust into an escalating situation where those with the most to lose will do anything to keep their secrets and humanity must face the ultimate test.
JasonFPenpusher
When the world?s deepest secrets start to become public knowledge, a disenfranchised former FBI profiler is thrust into an escalating situation where those with the most to lose will do anything to keep their secrets and humanity must face the ultimate test.
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I think the main problem is that you don’t share much of what is going on, replacing actual events with vague expressions:
If you don’t make it more specific, its title can?be “Every Political Conspiracy Thriller after DaVinci Code.”
And one note on style: “disenfranchised” is redundant, since you state “former,” right?
Cheers.