after being betrayed by her own family and husband, A assassin must get revenge and kill all of them, with her legendary sword

by kalanimiranda · Initiate · 63 pts 15 views

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Scott · Initiate · 40 pts

Strengths Well-defined POV Clear, difficult goal Filmable incident Causality and coherence

Needs work Active protagonist Stakes and urgency Specificity Action, not decision Concision No hedging

instead of "must get" perhaps " seeks revenge,"

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