Your logline is really long. Loglines?usually have a 25 to 30 word limit. Yours is 80 but most of the elements are there. You have a futuristic/alternate universe situation which you establish clearly. The main characters are the couple. A goal - to escape.
I had a stab at it using the standard logline formula.
When something happens, the flawed character/s must do the action/achieve the goal or else something bad will happen.
In a future where?relationships lasting more than 3 months are illegal, a young couple unwilling to part ways?must escape their totalitarian society before they are imprisoned.
I think your story concept of lovers running away?isn't original, however the world of the story would be (I'm sure you have a million interesting details in your head). It is the kind of movie that I would pay to see because I love unique worlds portrayed on screen.
It's execution dependant so your script execution will need to be top notch.?