When they find that the system they have been raised in does not care for them, eight kids from different classes and backgrounds fight to change what they think is a shifted system—with a little ancient help—or risk everyone they love and know being done dirty forever.

by Mic_1123 · Initiate · 69 pts 18 views

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vcaruso · Wordsmith · 363 pts

Strengths Filmable incident Stakes and urgency Causality and coherence Action, not decision

Needs work Well-defined POV Clear, difficult goal Active protagonist Specificity Concision

The premise seems similar to Marvel's runaways.
Suggestion that might cut the clutter:
eight kids from different cultures must seek ancient wisdom to battle the system they feel has abandoned them or lose everyone they love forever.

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