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  1. Posted: April 30, 2016In: Fantasy

    After witnessing a god rape her sister, a naive nymph seeks revenge, risking her life in the process.

    95Eric Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 2:33 am

    Great start! But it feels a little vague. What kind of god? Does the nymph have any faults that must be overcome. How is she going to risk her life?

    Great start! But it feels a little vague. What kind of god? Does the nymph have any faults that must be overcome. How is she going to risk her life?

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  2. Posted: May 1, 2016In: SciFi

    When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects a superhero, he breaks out of prison to create a cure for the woman he loves.

    95Eric Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 2:31 am

    Great start! But because it's a superhero ?story, it could be useful to hint at what makes the superhero "super". Is it an alien with special powers? A rich playboy that moonlights as a vigilante? That little bit of information will help the audience get a grasp of who the antagonist is.

    Great start! But because it’s a superhero ?story, it could be useful to hint at what makes the superhero “super”. Is it an alien with special powers? A rich playboy that moonlights as a vigilante? That little bit of information will help the audience get a grasp of who the antagonist is.

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