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  1. Posted: June 27, 2018In: Thriller

    When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, his life becomes ever more obscure the deeper he commits to it and the people involved.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 7:42 pm

    I would probably lean toward my second entry in the last post, however, change 'recognizes' for 'soon realizes'

    I would probably lean toward my second entry in the last post, however, change ‘recognizes’ for ‘soon realizes’

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2018In: Thriller

    When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, his life becomes ever more obscure the deeper he commits to it and the people involved.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 7:26 pm

    apologies, I was using the word obscured in the wrong context. My intention with it was to show that the robbery had become problematic, the wrong choice of word. "After a cash-hungry escort driver assembles a team of amateurs for an easy score, what should have been a?simple robbery becomes a dilemRead more

    apologies, I was using the word obscured in the wrong context. My intention with it was to show that the robbery had become problematic, the wrong choice of word.

    “After a cash-hungry escort driver assembles a team of amateurs for an easy score, what should have been a?simple robbery becomes a dilemma once he realizes his own depraved connection to the victim’

    ‘Having assembled a crew of amateur thieves for an easy score, a simple robbery becomes problematic for a cash-hungry?escort driver who recognizes his own dark and sinful connection to the victim’

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  3. Posted: June 27, 2018In: Thriller

    When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, his life becomes ever more obscure the deeper he commits to it and the people involved.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 12:08 am

    When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, a simple robbery becomes obscured by his unwitting connection to the victim.

    When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, a simple robbery becomes obscured by his unwitting connection to the victim.

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