1. Posted: April 20, 2018In:

    After 15years of running and keeping it a secret, a woman is forced to face her abuser when the love of her life leaves her. Will she be able to, to save her relationship?

    Absinthe Head Penpusher

    I don't know anything about what you are writing, so this is just an attempt at a re-write of your logline. Apologies if it is horrible. After 15 years on the run, a woman must come out of hiding and face up to her abuser in order to save her relationship with the love of her life and become whole aRead more

    I don’t know anything about what you are writing, so this is just an attempt at a re-write of your logline. Apologies if it is horrible.

    After 15 years on the run, a woman must come out of hiding and face up to her abuser in order to save her relationship with the love of her life and become whole again.

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  2. Posted: April 21, 2018In:

    A family – who are part of the same cult – discover that they must sacrifice themselves in order to enter the afterlife. But when Blake – the open-minded son – begins to suspect that there is no such thing, he must try to convince his brainwashed family to save themselves from their upcoming suicide. TITLE: Live to Die

    Absinthe Head Penpusher

    Maybe something along these lines?As? family who share unorthodox religious views prepare for their untimely entry into the afterlife, their son and brother Blake must question the doctrine and save his family from impending doom.

    Maybe something along these lines?

    As? family who share unorthodox religious views prepare for their untimely entry into the afterlife, their son and brother Blake must question the doctrine and save his family from impending doom.

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  3. Posted: May 13, 2018In:

    A young writer tries to accurately research her novel by getting pregnant and having an abortion, only to find out that she is infertile.

    Absinthe Head Penpusher

    I almost wish the ending did not give away the character's journey's end...

    I almost wish the ending did not give away the character’s journey’s end…

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