1. Posted: April 9, 2020In:

    With the help of his undead lost love, a reluctant store manager must return to the island where she was slain to prevent the escape of a primitive evil before the anniversary of her death.

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    Imaginative! What significance does the 'anniversary of her death' have in relation to the escaping of the evil? What is it about the main character that makes him the only man for the job? Does the undead lover enlist his help specifically? Is it already established that the undead and the living cRead more

    Imaginative!

    • What significance does the ‘anniversary of her death’ have in relation to the escaping of the evil?
    • What is it about the main character that makes him the only man for the job? Does the undead lover enlist his help specifically? Is it already established that the undead and the living characters can communicate or is it presented as a shock?
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  2. Posted: April 4, 2020In:

    An overnight caregiver and a bored stiff succubus form an unlikely alliance to launch a dark web speed dating site.

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    I would like to see some description of the two characters that give us an indication as to why they have both decided to go on this adventure together. Other questions I have are:What are their intentions for setting up this site? If the caregiver is the main character, perhaps he/she has good inteRead more

    I would like to see some description of the two characters that give us an indication as to why they have both decided to go on this adventure together. Other questions I have are:

    What are their intentions for setting up this site? If the caregiver is the main character, perhaps he/she has good intentions which the succubus exploits and then conflict arises between the two later on?

    Do they both plan to put it on the dark web initially or is there a deception involved? I don’t see a caregiver being someone who would know much about/ care much for the dark web.

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  3. Posted: April 6, 2020In:

    After receiving a private invite to compete,? five amateur cooks find themselves trapped by elite cannibals and must cook to win in order to survive.

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    As dpg asked, what are the details involved with not surviving? Perhaps its a competition with stages, and the loser becomes the main ingredient for the next dish, only the participants don't realize it at first. To me this idea would work well as a slow reveal, Jordan Peele type story. I like the pRead more

    As dpg asked, what are the details involved with not surviving? Perhaps its a competition with stages, and the loser becomes the main ingredient for the next dish, only the participants don’t realize it at first.

    To me this idea would work well as a slow reveal, Jordan Peele type story. I like the premise a lot!

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