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  1. Posted: January 13, 2020In: Horror

    When introverted twins experiences racially motivated harassment from their white classmates and one is sexually assaulted by their school counselor, the twins seeks revenge by hunting everyone who mistreated them.

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    Added an answer on January 14, 2020 at 6:52 am

    Agree with points made above- the first thing that came to my mind was how to get one MC with twins- perhaps they could be twins but of different race (this can happen!)- adds a twist to the racial drama that was mentioned above? If the racial abuse is commonplace from the outset of the movie, it woRead more

    Agree with points made above- the first thing that came to my mind was how to get one MC with twins- perhaps they could be twins but of different race (this can happen!)- adds a twist to the racial drama that was mentioned above?

    If the racial abuse is commonplace from the outset of the movie, it would make sense to have the sexual assault be the inciting event- perhaps from the only person they thought they could trust- the school counselor.

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  2. Posted: September 12, 2019In: Action

    An assassin with a split personality is hired to protect a client who, unknowingly, his other personality has been hired to kill.

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    Added an answer on September 14, 2019 at 2:11 am

    An instantly interesting logline with a lot of potential! I'm interested to know more about the client- what are his/her reasons for being the target of the hit and why does he/she choose the protagonist to help protect them. Agree with the above- what is the trigger for his changing of personalitieRead more

    An instantly interesting logline with a lot of potential!

    I’m interested to know more about the client- what are his/her reasons for being the target of the hit and why does he/she choose the protagonist to help protect them.

    Agree with the above- what is the trigger for his changing of personalities? Is it in the call to adventure of the mid point reversal that we are introduced to the direct conflict between the personalities?

    Consider me intrigued!

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  3. Posted: September 3, 2019In: Romance

    A guy asks 100 people “Which comedian is going to land on his feet and get his end away with an absolute cracker?”? You said, “Les Dennis,” our survey said, “Ding, top answer!” Jammy bastard.

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    Added an answer on September 12, 2019 at 12:18 pm

    Extras!

    Extras!

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