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    When the woman of his dreams is kidnapped by a mysterious figure, a manic-depressive alcoholic alters his entire life trajectory to save her from an ethereal shape-shifter that harvests souls for energy.

    AnkhEnergy Penpusher

    Thanks or your response! Seeing as its a logline, I don't see how I can possibly include the whole storyline. The lead must save the woman. To save the woman, he must alter his entire life trajectory. The back story is he's engaged, he's bi-polar because of childhood trauma, he's an alcoholic to deaRead more

    Thanks or your response! Seeing as its a logline, I don’t see how I can possibly include the whole storyline.

    The lead must save the woman. To save the woman, he must alter his entire life trajectory.

    The back story is he’s engaged, he’s bi-polar because of childhood trauma, he’s an alcoholic to deal with the memories of the trauma – he does everything everyone tells him to do, he stands for nothing, lets life just roll by. The trial that he must go through to save the woman will cause him to confront his demons (the shape-shifter loves those demons) or he will die as the Lagahoo’s slave – and so will this woman he’s fallen in love with. Essentially, he must sacrifice himself for the love of another.

    I found to include that in the logline will give away too much. I fell like a lot of those questions will be answered in the synopsis.

    Perhaps I can make “his entire life trajectory’ more specific.

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