1. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When a lovable teacher looses her job, she must steal her sister’s identity in order to apply and get her old job back.

    arvid97 Penpusher

    I really like the set-up and dilemma! A stolen identity story is always exciting, and I can't remember having seen it in this setting. What exactly must the teacher do when she's stolen her sister's identity, part from going on the job interview to get the position back?

    I really like the set-up and dilemma! A stolen identity story is always exciting, and I can’t remember having seen it in this setting. What exactly must the teacher do when she’s stolen her sister’s identity, part from going on the job interview to get the position back?

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2018In:

    When exiled from his town, a duplicitous man must confront his identity.

    arvid97 Penpusher

    Sounds cool but you could add some stakes and a clearer goal to make it easier to visualize :)

    Sounds cool but you could add some stakes and a clearer goal to make it easier to visualize 🙂

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2018In:

    When the daughter of an ex-CIA agent is kidnapped by human traffickers, he must hunt them down and save her before she gets sold as a sex slave. ? Taken

    arvid97 Penpusher

    Clear goal and stakes, I like it very much.

    Clear goal and stakes, I like it very much.

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