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  1. Posted: November 10, 2015In: Comedy

    When a conservative man adjusts to life in a wheelchair, he suddenly finds it difficult to achieve an erection. Snubbed by his busy, self-centered wife, and desperate to reclaim his virility, he must use something he hasn?t in years: porn. (Short Film)

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    Added an answer on November 10, 2015 at 10:52 am

    I don't find this to be interesting or unique. ?It's a guy on a wheelchair watching porn. Have you seen the film "The Sessions" about a 38 year's old man in an iron lung who decides that he doesn't want to die a virgin and he hires a professional sex surrogate who has a husband, a house and a son? IRead more

    I don’t find this to be interesting or unique. ?It’s a guy on a wheelchair watching porn.

    Have you seen the film “The Sessions” about a 38 year’s old man in an iron lung who decides that he doesn’t want to die a virgin and he hires a professional sex surrogate who has a husband, a house and a son? It’s inspired by a true story.

    That’s interesting and unique.

    Maybe if your main character was a former porno actor or a ladies man with a very active sexual life who has to adapt to the idea that things will never be has they were before and he has to find a new path on his life.

    Or maybe if the person who helps him to get his sexual life back was someone that one would not expect to do something like that. Like a nun or a lesbian.

    I don’t know. You need to figure out a way to make it more unique and interesting.

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  2. Posted: November 8, 2015In: Thriller

    An ambitious woman takes over her uncle?s struggling restaurant, determined to bring the business back to life. When the staff that don?t meet Wendy?s standards begin to disappear, the remaining employees start to question just how dedicated to her job their new manager might be. You?d better hope you?re on next week?s roster.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 10:03 am

    What if Wendy was not the killer and she had to figure out who is killing her staff and prove to the police that she's innocent? Then you would have mystery.

    What if Wendy was not the killer and she had to figure out who is killing her staff and prove to the police that she’s innocent? Then you would have mystery.

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  3. Posted: November 9, 2015In: Crime

    When a midnight-show radio host receives an anonymous hint about a mysterious murder, he sets out to find the real killer and needs to convince the police they’re after the wrong person.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 9:01 am

    There is a book with a similar concept. Here's the logline of "Intent To Kill" By James?Grippando: Ryan James, a former minor-league baseball player turned sports radio host, receives an anonymous tip about the unsolved hit-and-run accident that killed his wife three years prior live on the air, butRead more

    There is a book with a similar concept.

    Here’s the logline of “Intent To Kill” By James?Grippando:

    Ryan James, a former minor-league baseball player turned sports radio host, receives an anonymous tip about the unsolved hit-and-run accident that killed his wife three years prior live on the air, but the information points to a powerful New England family, and puts Ryan, his wife’s brother “Babes,” and the case’s prosecutor in danger.

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