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When a young Latina, Izel Madrid, finds out she descends from Aztec gods, she decides to join forces with the charmingly surly, shapeshifting detective, Elias Navarro, in order to fight supernatural crime and find out the truth about her lineage.
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See lessA grief-stricken man anoints himself the prince of a make-believe country to help his young son cope with his mother?s death but the story spirals out of control and he must come to terms with his own loss before his son is taken into state custody.
The first snag, for me, is the word "anoint." An important point - the mom's death - doesn't make an appearance until the middle of the logline. ?You might introduce that earlier. ?"Coping with his wife's death...." or something like that, would eliminate the need to use the phrase grief-stricken anRead more
The first snag, for me, is the word “anoint.” An important point – the mom’s death – doesn’t make an appearance until the middle of the logline. ?You might introduce that earlier. ?”Coping with his wife’s death….” or something like that, would eliminate the need to use the phrase grief-stricken and free up some logline real estate. And, I don’t think you have to spell out that the son might be taken into state custody. The fact that the dad is losing his marbles, right after his mother has died, is threat enough in a child’s life – to the reader.
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