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  1. Posted: June 19, 2017In: Drama

    When a neglected housewife discovers that the nest will be empty sooner than she had planned, she follows her daughter to the beach for the summer in an effort to save their last few months together, quickly realizing she has a lot to learn about their relationship, her marriage and herself.

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    Added an answer on July 11, 2017 at 8:48 pm

    Thank you, everyone, for your thoughts and ideas. ?This is a tough one for me because the ultimate story is the emotional journey the protagonist goes on, but of course she doesn't know that going into it, and it's hard to base a movie around an internal story. ?She is in a bad marriage, which doesRead more

    Thank you, everyone, for your thoughts and ideas. ?This is a tough one for me because the ultimate story is the emotional journey the protagonist goes on, but of course she doesn’t know that going into it, and it’s hard to base a movie around an internal story. ?She is in a bad marriage, which does play into the story a little bit, but I wanted the focus to be on her relationship with her daughter and what she learns about herself through this experience with her. ?So here’s my revised logline. ?I hope it clarifies the story a little bit better:

    When a neglected housewife, and soon-to-be empty-nester, learns of her daughter?s plans to spend the summer away from her, she follows her daughter to the beach in an effort to force her into one last bonding experience.

    Please let me know what you think.

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