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  1. Posted: November 1, 2017In: Thriller

    A smart sophisticated business woman comes across a document that ends up pushing her to a limit beyond her control.

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    Added an answer on November 1, 2017 at 1:08 pm

    I think we need more specifics such as what type of business.? Also, we need an antagonist other than a document like a secret organization behind the formation of the document.? Also, pushing the limit is a clich?

    I think we need more specifics such as what type of business.? Also, we need an antagonist other than a document like a secret organization behind the formation of the document.? Also, pushing the limit is a clich?

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  2. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Thriller

    A mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.

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    Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 3:28 am

    I don't think you need to give the conclusion of killing the brother in the logline.? I also don't see any reason to mention she has 2 cloned children.? ?I would simply say something like this: "Impeded by her own brother, a genetically enhanced woman finds she has the power to kill with just her thRead more

    I don’t think you need to give the conclusion of killing the brother in the logline.? I also don’t see any reason to mention she has 2 cloned children.? ?I would simply say something like this:

    “Impeded by her own brother, a genetically enhanced woman finds she has the power to kill with just her thoughts and unleashes this power to save her children.”

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  3. Posted: October 26, 2017In: Action

    ?An unlikely duo of a wacky magician and a former Shaolin nun must stop the released demon to save the kingdom and their lives from the demon?s revenge.?

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    Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 3:12 am

    How does this sound??"When a trapped demon escapes, an unlikely duo of a faithless nun and a reluctant magician are tasked by the queen to recapture it and save the kingdom."

    How does this sound??“When a trapped demon escapes, an unlikely duo of a faithless nun and a reluctant magician are tasked by the queen to recapture it and save the kingdom.”

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