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  1. Posted: October 31, 2017In: Comedy

    After the worst week of his adult life, a dispirited nice guy chooses guidance on becoming an alpha over suicide.

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    Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 9:08 am

    Here is a small revision... Also, this is for a webseries I intend to produce soon. "An exemplar Beta male becomes dispirited when he loses a testicle, his job, and his wife all in the same week. Suicide might be an option if he can't learn to become an Alpha male."

    Here is a small revision… Also, this is for a webseries I intend to produce soon.
    “An exemplar Beta male becomes dispirited when he loses a testicle, his job, and his wife all in the same week. Suicide might be an option if he can’t learn to become an Alpha male.”

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  2. Posted: October 31, 2017In: Crime

    A city detective, who’s going through a mid-life crisis, is summoned to a small town where he’ll struggle to catch a serial killer, and where he’ll also face the chance to give his life meaning again.

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    Added an answer on October 31, 2017 at 7:31 am

    Feeling irrelivant in his city, a detective tavels to a small town to track a serial killer and rediscovers his passion in life.

    Feeling irrelivant in his city, a detective tavels to a small town to track a serial killer and rediscovers his passion in life.

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  3. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Thriller

    A mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.

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    Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 3:28 am

    I don't think you need to give the conclusion of killing the brother in the logline.? I also don't see any reason to mention she has 2 cloned children.? ?I would simply say something like this: "Impeded by her own brother, a genetically enhanced woman finds she has the power to kill with just her thRead more

    I don’t think you need to give the conclusion of killing the brother in the logline.? I also don’t see any reason to mention she has 2 cloned children.? ?I would simply say something like this:

    “Impeded by her own brother, a genetically enhanced woman finds she has the power to kill with just her thoughts and unleashes this power to save her children.”

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