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One lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money for his wedding but he unexpectedly falls for him, and as they sail together his feelings grow deeper until he’s force to reveal it.
Seems like it could make for an interesting philosophical story and I get a bit of a Life of Pi vibe, however, there is a problem with the characters' common need of finding identity as savinh0 stated earlier - you need to have a physical, visual goal. In regards to this, It'd probably be a good ideRead more
Seems like it could make for an interesting philosophical story and I get a bit of a Life of Pi vibe, however, there is a problem with the characters’ common need of finding identity as savinh0 stated earlier – you need to have a physical, visual goal. In regards to this, It’d probably be a good idea to state your character’s psychology in the logline so the character’s flaw is easy to pick up and gives us an insight as to how these characters are supposed to change as they’re trying to achieve their goal.
I hope this helps : )
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A very creative, interesting logline. I can see the directions in which this story can go and potential challenges he might face along the way; raising questions of how will he try to survive? Will he survive? What will he learn? which is a good sign as it incites imagination, seems cohesive in theRead more
A very creative, interesting logline.
I can see the directions in which this story can go and potential challenges he might face along the way; raising questions of how will he try to survive? Will he survive? What will he learn? which is a good sign as it incites imagination, seems cohesive in the journey the character must go on, and generates interest as it gets you to question what will happen to the protagonist.
Now you’ve got me hooked!
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