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In a rural town, when a young, na?ve wife of an older, powerful cult leader becomes a secret prostitute, she discovers the town’s and cult’s dirty dark secrets that empower her to create a sex empire.
So does she become a madam? How does building? a sex empire help her get her son back? It sounds like she uses being a prostitute to get her adopted son back but why?? Is the son being held captive by the cult or is he just an adopted child by a foster family that she is trying to get back. It seemsRead more
So does she become a madam? How does building? a sex empire help her get her son back?
It sounds like she uses being a prostitute to get her adopted son back but why?? Is the son being held captive by the cult or is he just an adopted child by a foster family that she is trying to get back.
It seems really cluttered like i’m not sure what the story is.
Try:
A former member of a cult escapes but leaves her son behind and now must use the cults mind control techniques to bring him back home before he is sacrificed to the group.
Not your story but i had a hard time adding in the sex empire part it doesn’t seem needed.? Just try and break it down to the basics of the story and what it is actually about and it makes it a little easier.
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It is missing a little detail kinda like a backstory So if I were to say After? rejecting her best friend a newlywed bride must protect herself and her husband from a jealous friend who is intent on making her his bride even if that means murder. I know it sounds like a lifetime movie but im still fRead more
It is missing a little detail kinda like a backstory
So if I were to say
After? rejecting her best friend a newlywed bride must protect herself and her husband from a jealous friend who is intent on making her his bride even if that means murder.
I know it sounds like a lifetime movie but im still fleshing out the details.
See lessA pugnacious princess from a dimension of ghouls gets banished to Earth for her constant mayhem to live with a cowardly nerd she protects.
I think it is not telling what the story is about. I have no idea what the story is about. I assume that it is about a princess who is banished to earth but why? Where is the conflict? I think if you went with something like: After accidently destroying her home planet an alien princess is now forceRead more
I think it is not telling what the story is about. I have no idea what the story is about.
I assume that it is about a princess who is banished to earth but why?
Where is the conflict? I think if you went with something like:
After accidently destroying her home planet an alien princess is now forced to find a new life on earth as a human woman.
A bit wordy but the premise is hard to be honest.
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