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  1. Posted: April 6, 2018In: Drama

    When his own handgun is used to kill his partner, an unassuming detective defies the police department by refusing to carry a gun, even as he pursues the killer.

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    Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 10:22 am

    I've seen enough Law & Order to know that the dept wouldn't let the detective investigate his partner's murder, especially if his gun is the murder weapon. Perhaps he takes a leave of absence and goes after the killers on his own time. And perhaps the killing is so brutal he's turned off of gunsRead more

    I’ve seen enough Law & Order to know that the dept wouldn’t let the detective investigate his partner’s murder, especially if his gun is the murder weapon. Perhaps he takes a leave of absence and goes after the killers on his own time. And perhaps the killing is so brutal he’s turned off of guns and opts for other weapons or swears off weapons altogether. Just my take.

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  2. Posted: March 22, 2018In: SciFi

    After learning his mother is dying due to lack of healthcare coverage and money, a promising med student abruptly quits school to compete in a dangerous TV show offering $1 million to the lone survivor who is still alive at the end of the game.

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    Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 9:32 am

    I like the implied conflict between the med student's future career as a doctor juxtaposed to his lack of faith in the very healthcare system that would sustain him. As others have said, logline is a bit wordy, but that's an easy fix. Interesting and timely concept!

    I like the implied conflict between the med student’s future career as a doctor juxtaposed to his lack of faith in the very healthcare system that would sustain him. As others have said, logline is a bit wordy, but that’s an easy fix. Interesting and timely concept!

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  3. Posted: April 1, 2018In: Horror

    After a near death accident leaves a man with the ability to see behind the veil, he soon finds his real mission is to stop a unique werewolf from tearing apart the veil and destroy reality.

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    Added an answer on April 6, 2018 at 9:24 am

    After an accident leaves [John] clinging between life and death, he's mysteriously given special abilities to fight devious creatures behind the veil in order to save himself - and everyone else. My two cents. Story sounds very interesting.

    After an accident leaves [John] clinging between life and death, he’s mysteriously given special abilities to fight devious creatures behind the veil in order to save himself – and everyone else.

    My two cents. Story sounds very interesting.

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