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  1. Posted: January 23, 2017In: Action

    A plucky archaeologist and his meddlesome team must search a brittle primordial underground temple for escape when an excavation mishap destroys the entrance and awakens a man-eating Yeti.

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    I like this one! It would benefit from a bit of tightening: 'A plucky archaeologist and his meddlesome team must escape an ancient underground temple when an excavation mishap destroys the entrance and awakens a man-eating Yeti.' Also, why are his team meddlesome? Are they incompetent? Do they not lRead more

    I like this one! It would benefit from a bit of tightening: ‘A plucky archaeologist and his meddlesome team must escape an ancient underground temple when an excavation mishap destroys the entrance and awakens a man-eating Yeti.’ Also, why are his team meddlesome? Are they incompetent? Do they not like the archaeologist?

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2017In: Romance

    A movie star plagued by scandal quits his Hollywood life and moves to Australia to find a new purpose.

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    How about adding more detail about the conflict here? For example, is he a spoiled movie star? If so, the harsh, amenity-restricted Australian outback would be a real challenge.

    How about adding more detail about the conflict here? For example, is he a spoiled movie star? If so, the harsh, amenity-restricted Australian outback would be a real challenge.

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  3. Posted: January 10, 2017In: Romance

    A socially awkward author from New York City only leaves his apartment at night until he falls in love with an ambitious politician who is spending every day in front of a camera.

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    Added an answer on January 11, 2017 at 8:30 am

    I'm a sucker for films like this - what a great premise. The conflict is clear and it is already firing up my imagination :)

    I’m a sucker for films like this – what a great premise. The conflict is clear and it is already firing up my imagination 🙂

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