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A 12 year-old drug dealer evades his police officer mother as the opioid crisis comes to town.
Thank you! Much appreciated. My pilot is lacking a self-contained story - it's all set-up - and that makes it hard to fill in the gaps you've identified. I'm not even quite sure who the protagonist is. You've helped me identify a few ways in which the story is incomplete. There are a number of candiRead more
Thank you! Much appreciated.
My pilot is lacking a self-contained story – it’s all set-up – and that makes it hard to fill in the gaps you’ve identified. I’m not even quite sure who the protagonist is. You’ve helped me identify a few ways in which the story is incomplete. There are a number of candidates for an inciting incident, but none that is quite compelling enough, which I think is a showstopper. Will struggle on, thank you for this feedback.
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