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  1. Posted: May 11, 2017In: Comedy

    Cutting ties with society, a overconfident young man embarks on a soul-searching solo hike into the canadian wilderness. He comes to the humble realization of his own inexperience as hostile weather sets in. To make matters worse, he runs into a girl stuck in a similar situation camped only a few yards away. As they reluctantly join forces to survive the storm, they swallow their pride and come to the humbling conclusion that perhaps they aren’t as mature, independent or unique as they thought, and that maybe soul searching ventures aren’t as grandiose or successful as books led them to believe. (Short Film)

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2017 at 12:24 am

    Way, way, way too long. As above 101 words. Use the above 'Formula' direction or search online for samples, many sites have them.

    Way, way, way too long. As above 101 words. Use the above ‘Formula’ direction or search online for samples, many sites have them.

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2012

    "Mamie Marchbanks, seventeen and oh so sassy, is a performer. She performs with circuses, Mexican travelling players and Mack Sennett, but her father and his bounty hunter are in pursuit."

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    Added an answer on May 14, 2017 at 5:39 am

    No hook as to why she's running.? Don't use names. And like above Mexican Traveling Players clarify what they are??? What kind of performer? Biggest need is why is she running .? Who is the antagonist? Might be tied to why she's running.

    No hook as to why she’s running.? Don’t use names. And like above Mexican Traveling Players clarify what they are??? What kind of performer? Biggest need is why is she running .? Who is the antagonist? Might be tied to why she’s running.

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2017In: Drama

    Rework: When an Australian find of Nazi-confiscated, priceless coins is stolen in a double murder, a Police Detective must solve another forty year old crime to find the culprit.

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    Added an answer on May 11, 2017 at 12:50 am

    The protagonist's goal, the conflict, who's the antagonist. What is at stake if he fails?

    The protagonist’s goal, the conflict, who’s the antagonist. What is at stake if he fails?

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