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  1. Posted: March 27, 2020In: Drama

    A basketball star must battle his vengeful mother’s attempt to sabotage his championship hopes when a posthumous letter from his long-lost dad reveals the young man was abducted and raised under a false identity.

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    Added an answer on March 28, 2020 at 7:46 am

    Thank you yqwertz. I think I'm through actually posting anymore versions for a while. I did come up with another version (see below), which might be more effective? Logline: After a college basketball star plays on national television, his championship hopes are jeopardized after a family relative dRead more

    Thank you yqwertz. I think I’m through actually posting anymore versions for a while. I did come up with another version (see below), which might be more effective?

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    After a college basketball star plays on national television, his championship hopes are jeopardized after a family relative delivers proof the young man had been abducted and given a new identity by his felonious mother.

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  2. Posted: March 27, 2020In: Drama

    A basketball star must battle his vengeful mother’s attempt to sabotage his championship hopes when a posthumous letter from his long-lost dad reveals the young man was abducted and raised under a false identity.

    carllord Logliner
    Added an answer on March 28, 2020 at 12:30 am

    Would this logline make more sense? When a college basketball star, abducted as a child by his addicted mother is seen playing in a nationally televised game, he must prove his true identity or miss the playoffs when a distant uncle delivers a posthumous letter from his long-lost dad detailing the yRead more

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    When a college basketball star, abducted as a child by his addicted mother is seen playing in a nationally televised game, he must prove his true identity or miss the playoffs when a distant uncle delivers a posthumous letter from his long-lost dad detailing the young man?s untold past.

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