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  1. Posted: January 23, 2017In: Student Loglines

    An aging war criminal seeks his redemption by helping a group of troubled misfits whilst trying to survive brutal persecution from someone he wronged in the past.

    Cesar Augusto Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 8, 2017 at 12:16 pm

    This remind me of Gran Torino, a movie that I love. I'm posting the logline here, direct from imdb to you see how clear is: "Disgruntled Korean War veteran Walt Kowalski sets out to reform his neighbor, a Hmong teenager who tried to steal Kowalski's prized possession: a 1972 Gran Torino." I think yoRead more

    This remind me of Gran Torino, a movie that I love. I’m posting the logline here, direct from imdb to you see how clear is: “Disgruntled Korean War veteran Walt Kowalski sets out to reform his neighbor, a Hmong teenager who tried to steal Kowalski’s prized possession: a 1972 Gran Torino.” I think you should try to get more specific, show us the particularities of your story, who is the MC, who is after him. I think with more details we can immerse ourselves in history more easily.

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  2. Posted: February 4, 2017In: Thriller

    After his son confesses a murder to him, an obsessively upright police officer on the brink of a once in a lifetime promotion must use all his power and skills to destroy all evidence before the truth is uncovered.

    Cesar Augusto Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 8, 2017 at 12:03 pm

    I think it could be better if in the logline you raise the question if the father will or not commit a crime to save his son instead of just give us the answer.

    I think it could be better if in the logline you raise the question if the father will or not commit a crime to save his son instead of just give us the answer.

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