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  1. Posted: April 16, 2018In: Thriller

    When a deranged brother suddenly kidnaps his younger teenage sister, she must decide whether to awaken or resist her own sadistic urges to survive without becoming a killer herself.

    chanesingletary Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 16, 2018 at 2:53 pm

    You're right. The second half of the logline can be confusing especially now that I've reread it a couple of times. Basically, the sister has the potential to become a serial killer in the making but she does her best to suppress these urges. However, when her unstable brother returns (having been eRead more

    You’re right. The second half of the logline can be confusing especially now that I’ve reread it a couple of times. Basically, the sister has the potential to become a serial killer in the making but she does her best to suppress these urges. However, when her unstable brother returns (having been estranged from the family years ago) and kidnaps her, she begins to realize that she might die. This is where the conflict arises in her decision to channel her violent tendencies as a way to escape (kill her brother) but could result in her enjoying it too much and going down the same dark path as him. The whole slippery slope dilemma.

    Here’s an edit but still unsure:


    When she is kidnapped by her brother, a young girl decides to use her own sadistic urges to her advantage to turn the tables on him and escape.

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