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While on a routine mission, the angel of death awakens the wrath of the apocalypse and must travel through hell to find his redemption.
Semantics notwithstanding, it took me a couple reads before your logline began to make sense. For a cold reader who would inevitably read this script, this logline would need some punching up. The wording is a little tricky which could make this somewhat hard to comprehend, which might beget questioRead more
Semantics notwithstanding, it took me a couple reads before your logline began to make sense. For a cold reader who would inevitably read this script, this logline would need some punching up. The wording is a little tricky which could make this somewhat hard to comprehend, which might beget questions instead of intrigue.
I am assuming the Angel of Death is the protagonist, right? Is his mission to awaken the apocalypse, or did he do this by accident? Is this Apocalypse a person? Is he trying to stop it and can only do so via Divine Comedy? Or is this an additional conflict on his road to redemption?
See lessWhen a competitive young man looses his chance to reach a famous mountain top against both bad weather as well as because of his total lack of cooperation with his team he ends up arrested when the second world war sets off during his trip and must learn to become a humble man to survive in a world totally different from anything he ever experienced before.
This might be me, but this reads as two loglines. Both possess a lot of information, one giving the time period and the latter describing the protagonist; yet both could be condensed into one. Especially for an epic like this movie, what is the most vital storyline and what does he get to experienceRead more
This might be me, but this reads as two loglines. Both possess a lot of information, one giving the time period and the latter describing the protagonist; yet both could be condensed into one. Especially for an epic like this movie, what is the most vital storyline and what does he get to experience?
PITCH: After a series of unfortunate events, a competitive, stubborn man falls short of one goal to understand and embrace humility in the presence of the future Dalai Lama. (had to reference IMdB)
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