Granted this is a more subtle message than locke. It is a story of a man who is at his lowest ebb and clearly in need of help (even if he himself is in denial). After an opening call with his daughter it becomes apparent how far he is concealing his struggle. His pain is reduced during an unexpected and deeply personal message, deilivered through a stranger whose identity we never know. It is then left for the audience to decide what actually
happened (is there is an uknown force at work or is all just coincidence). Hopefully the viewer would find it to be an uplifting story (or maybe not – I’ll find out when the short story results are announced)

I appreciate the feedback but without going into the whole story in detail it’s difficult explain in one sentence. To summarise, although being set mainly in the trucks cab there would be flashbacks which explain the significance of the conversation (to the lorry driver). The conclusion of the story is meant to be left to the viewers personal interpretation. My idea of a logline is that it makes the viewer interested in the story in this case a depressed lorry driver has an enightening conversation with a mysterious stranger and whether or not this makes the reader want to know more ? An example of a similar set up would be the movie Locke starring Tom Hardy which is an unresolved story about a man on a journey dealing with a difficult period of his life in a series of phone calls.