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  1. Posted: April 24, 2019In: Thriller

    A lawyer unwittingly frees and later marries a guilty man. Now she?ll stop at nothing to see him convicted of a murder he didn?t commit.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on April 25, 2019 at 4:56 am

    Here?s another spin: A corporate attorney, working pro bono, frees a man convicted of murdering his college sweetheart. But when his terrified new girlfriend finds strong evidence of his guilt, they hatch a plan to take him down. Notes: She?s working pro bono (I did this for 12 years on a murder casRead more

    Here?s another spin:

    A corporate attorney, working pro bono, frees a man convicted of murdering his college sweetheart. But when his terrified new girlfriend finds strong evidence of his guilt, they hatch a plan to take him down.

    Notes:

    She?s working pro bono (I did this for 12 years on a murder case).

    I?m dropping the married part, too much for 120 pages. There can be sexual tension.

    I won?t reveal that the plan is to hide his new girlfriend who has been beaten to a pulp and set him up for her murder.

    My lawyer?s ethics have gone out the window because I?ll give her a terminal illness. Only way I can see now to solve this problem.

    I just have to make him beyond terrible for the audience to root for the women here.

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2019In: Comedy

    A reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a twisted and manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on April 25, 2019 at 4:32 am

    I like it.

    I like it.

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  3. Posted: April 8, 2019In: Noir

    Gruesome copycat murders hit a sleepy-coastal town, forcing an excited rookie to seek the help of a miserable retired detective, only to stumble upon information that endangers both their lives.

    Ckharper Samurai
    Added an answer on April 24, 2019 at 5:48 pm

    ?When gruesome copycat murders hit a sleepy coastal-town, a rookie cop enlists the help of a retired detective to hunt the killer.? Agree with other comment that discovery of info probably doesn?t need to be here. Their lives are going to be in danger bc they are hunting a killer after all. I?m guesRead more

    ?When gruesome copycat murders hit a sleepy coastal-town, a rookie cop enlists the help of a retired detective to hunt the killer.?

    Agree with other comment that discovery of info probably doesn?t need to be here. Their lives are going to be in danger bc they are hunting a killer after all. I?m guessing that since you put ?copycat? in there and this vague ?information?, they are going to find out that somehow another cop was involved in original murders and maybe current ones. Which has been done many times before. But I could be wrong! And even if I?m right, a brilliant script is a brilliant script even if has similar plot to others.

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