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A bloodthirsty psychopath traumatized by the murder of his mother forms a group of dangerous terrorists with the goal of avenging his mother and destroying the criminals and gangsters of his town. He is later ought to face a famous and intelligent detective.
Who, Goal, Obstacle...This is the spine of what a logline is suppose to contain. This logline is a very good start...I say keep re-writing it to get it even more specific to the spine/core of your narrative. I highly suggest this be ONE sentence. I would re-write it something like this..(look below)Read more
Who, Goal, Obstacle…This is the spine of what a logline is suppose to contain. This logline is a very good start…I say keep re-writing it to get it even more specific to the spine/core of your narrative. I highly suggest this be ONE sentence. I would re-write it something like this..(look below). But I think we’re still missing a specific obstacle or antagonist…I would suggest you re-visit your character’s goal and motivation, because just by reading the logline, I am not understanding his/her clear goal and motivation. Good luck!
A?vengeful psychopath traumatized by the murder of his mother forms a group of dangerous terrorists? to ?obliterate the gangsters of his town.
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