1. Posted: August 19, 2020In:

    A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

    CLAY53 Penpusher

    Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force. Hi Mike, does this structure work better for you even if you do not agree philosophically?

    Brutalized his entire life by an evil, racist, brutal police force, a homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes revenge against a homicidal police force.

    Hi Mike, does this structure work better for you even if you do not agree philosophically?

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  2. Posted: August 19, 2020In:

    A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

    CLAY53 Penpusher

    Your comment helps, and I appreciate your words and the time you took the write them. The Scriptures state Revenge is the Lords. People don't want to accept when the Lord returns, he returns with a weapon of war... Why? To get revenge against all the evil, racist, brutal police (smile)... That's howRead more

    Your comment helps, and I appreciate your words and the time you took the write them. The Scriptures state Revenge is the Lords. People don’t want to accept when the Lord returns, he returns with a weapon of war… Why? To get revenge against all the evil, racist, brutal police (smile)… That’s how my Lord rolls. Thank you, Mike.

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  3. Posted: August 19, 2020In:

    A homeless man commits suicide, resurrects as Christ the Lord, and takes his revenge against a racist homicidal police force.

    CLAY53 Penpusher

    My sentence structure had too many and's so I wrote a more concise sentence

    My sentence structure had too many and’s so I wrote a more concise sentence

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