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  1. Posted: May 3, 2020In: Drama

    Losing his eyesight gradually due to a rare disease, an introverted painter hurries to finish his last painting to participate in an important exhibition going trough an existential crisis.

    Charles M Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 4, 2020 at 6:52 am

    Thanks?Mike Pedley? for your constructive comment!   It is the painter who is going through an existential crisis and not the exhibition. It's a syntax error from me. In fact, my language is French and I try to translate? as best as I can. This comment will probably contain errors and I apoloziRead more

    Thanks?Mike Pedley? for your constructive comment!

     

    It is the painter who is going through an existential crisis and not the exhibition. It’s a syntax error from me. In fact, my language is French and I try to translate? as best as I can. This comment will probably contain errors and I apolozige in advance.

    Also, I need to specify that it is a logline for a short film! The short duration of this format allows us to capture a brief moment in the caracter’s life which is the existential crisis.

    First, because of his introverted nature, the caracter is closed on himself.? His art is the only way for him to? feel that the world around him does’nt flee from him. ?The painter spends more time applying the colors on the canvas than admiring with his eyes the landscape that stands in front of him.? He knows exactly the effect of lighting on the shadow in the hollow of the faces of his models, but he doesn’t know the person behind. He has a very mathematical, very detailed vision of painting. But soon, he will become blind and he will no longer be able to paint. ?When making his last masterpiece, a lady portrait, he realizes that the most important is to live in the present moment, it is the only real way to feel that time does not flee from him. In this process, he will be more interested in his model, the real person behind the portrait. Finally, the work of art is marked by the different psychological states that the painter has gone through. One half of the face is amazingly precise, which shows that the painter had technique at heart and considered painting as a mathematical science. He is the painter of the beginning. The other half is much more whimsical and the colors are not always realistic. This shows that the painter allowed himself to be guided by his emotions following his awareness. He is the painter of the end. He just has time to take a look at his work before sinking into darkness forever.

    Second, the character’s obstacle comes from him. It is his sense of lack. His feeling of watching the world go by without acting. This causes him anxiety and sadness. To overcome this obstacle, he decides to take charge of himself and take advantage of all the moments he has left before his new life. He develops a relationship with his model who will later become his life partner. It allows him to take a new look at the world around him.

     

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