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When her raw, tell-all article about her marriage goes viral, a struggling writer must navigate a toxic, public literary feud with her successful husband to finally achieve the fame and recognition she craves.
I'd watch this! I wonder if there's scope to tighten it with some microsurgery. For me "raw" and "tell-all" cover similar ground. Likewise, if the feud is toxic, that suggests to me it's public. And if it were mine, I'd cut "finally". But the story tension is apparent and compelling here already.
I’d watch this! I wonder if there’s scope to tighten it with some microsurgery. For me “raw” and “tell-all” cover similar ground. Likewise, if the feud is toxic, that suggests to me it’s public. And if it were mine, I’d cut “finally”. But the story tension is apparent and compelling here already.
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