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  1. Posted: January 17, 2022In: Drama

    “An African-American family moves into a small gated community faces racial discrimination from the white community members is forced to leave, but everything changes when a terrible incident occurs, which ends racism”

    Danny Penpusher
    Replied to answer on January 19, 2022 at 1:49 am

    Thank you Richie, I added it but couldn't form a correct sentence to fit it, that's why I ended like this. The previous one was, " An African-American family moves into a small gated community faces racial discrimination, raises their voice against few white members of the community, but eventuallyRead more

    Thank you Richie, I added it but couldn’t form a correct sentence to fit it, that’s why I ended like this.

    The previous one was,

    ” An African-American family moves into a small gated community faces racial discrimination, raises their voice against few white members of the community, but eventually fails, give up, decides to leave, unexpectedly an terrible incident occurs, which ends racism”

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  2. Posted: June 14, 2021In: Comedy

    Inorder to Save and Marry his Indian Girlfriend who is getting arranged Married, An American Highschool teacher is being tricked by his Indian Student and Colleagues plans & Kidnaps his Girlfriend from her Strict Cultural Family

    Danny Penpusher
    Replied to answer on June 21, 2021 at 6:32 pm

    Yes thank you odie, Actually it happens in US and teacher is a US citizen and his girlfriend is First generation indian from US not a student Yes trick part is actually the hook which is finally revealed The Student is also first generation Indian American finds his teacher is helpless so he decidesRead more

    Yes thank you odie,

    Actually it happens in US and teacher is a US citizen and his girlfriend is First generation indian from US not a student

    Yes trick part is actually the hook which is finally revealed

    The Student is also first generation Indian American finds his teacher is helpless so he decides to help him

    What motivates the student to help him is the main twist or plot in the story! Thats why he tricks him into kidnapping Which the truth is revealed later

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  3. Posted: June 14, 2021In: Comedy

    Inorder to Save and Marry his Indian Girlfriend who is getting arranged Married, An American Highschool teacher is being tricked by his Indian Student and Colleagues plans & Kidnaps his Girlfriend from her Strict Cultural Family

    Danny Penpusher
    Replied to answer on June 18, 2021 at 2:36 am

    Hey Mate, Its perfect, Thank you I'm still unclear with my Plot what to reflect and what not to Please find this revised one, i've added few lines “A lovelorn high school teacher is being tricked by his student and colleagues resorts to kidnapping his Indian girlfriend from getting arranged marriedRead more

    Hey Mate,

    Its perfect, Thank you

    I’m still unclear with my Plot what to reflect and what not to

    Please find this revised one, i’ve added few lines

    “A lovelorn high school teacher is being tricked by his student and colleagues resorts to kidnapping his Indian girlfriend from getting arranged married and then fighting her strict cultural family takes her to L.A and Marries her”

    Pls advice if this is understandable and clear

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